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Vesa
Jul 2, 2007 16:51:29 GMT -5
Post by Vesa's Sunset on Jul 2, 2007 16:51:29 GMT -5
Name: Vesa Gender: Female Age: 2 years Breed: Gray Wolf
Appearence: Vesa has a shining gray pelt with a glistening silver outline. She is a large wolf who has a set of beautiful golden orbs set upon her maw. She also has a red ribbon around her red that signles danger.
Personality: Vesa is not the wolf you want to run into every day. She is tough and mean, and alpha female most definently. She hates almost everyone she meets.
History: She can't remember.
Moves Known: Earth Magic Basic Slash Powerful Glare
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Nemisis
Site Generals
Second in Command
Yeah, I changed my name agian...what of it?
Posts: 77
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Vesa
Jul 3, 2007 8:18:06 GMT -5
Post by Nemisis on Jul 3, 2007 8:18:06 GMT -5
Go to the list of moves and pick out her fight moves. A little more work on the personality and description might be nice. Other than that, nice work.
Denied, for now.
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Vesa
Jul 4, 2007 13:16:25 GMT -5
Post by Vesa's Sunset on Jul 4, 2007 13:16:25 GMT -5
Is this good enough? Mine are usaully longer, but i'm tired... *groans*
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Vesa
Jul 5, 2007 7:49:17 GMT -5
Post by XXSilentXOneXX on Jul 5, 2007 7:49:17 GMT -5
Approved. Only cuz it's your first. It's not bad I guess. Start rping.
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